The Fishing Hole
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"Fishing Hole," story of Amos by Joshua
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How Does a Story Get Started?
A passing remark, over hearing only part of a conversation, finding an odd picture and wondering what sort of
story it might entail, memories, a joke, and an endless list of things and prompt an author to click on a new Microsoft Word Document.
Take a look at the crop of a picture I found on line while doing an on line search about youth culture and jeans of the 1960s and 70s.
Good Samaritans: Beware
I got to thinking: How would I, or an assortment or other individuals react to unexpectedly coming across a person who was tied up?
An author would do well considering several takes on what might go through the mind of the person who finds
a person tied up. There can be compassion, but also some real fears that need to be considered. The job of writing up such a story gave me
new insights to the Gospel story of the Good Samaritan. I actually found reason to excuse those who walked past and ignore the victim.
Criminals often tie a person up before an execution. The victim may or not be an innocent person. Could the
thief, thieves or armed executioners still be near by? What would they do about a Good Samaritan witness?
Rock Star
A passing remark, especially a humorous one, can invoke stories or can be blended into a story. A friend of mine
was having a rough go of it at work with pressures coming from several sectors. He laughed it off while at the same time expressing his
frustrations with a line I promise to include in a future story: “I should have listened to my mother. She wanted me to be a rock star.”
Think about different angles; oddities that can make a intersting part of
your story.
Walking stick? A walk in the woods or because of an injury?
A roll of 35mm film behind some books? Evidence of crime? Family pictures from a time they couldn't afford to have it developed?
Shaded eye glasses: Protection from the sun, shady person, or just plain shy? Maybe cool looking?
A lady whips out her wallet from her back jean pocket just like a man would. What's her background? Maybe a widow who grew up as the only girl in
in a farm family with six brothers? She inherited the farm, her folks died and she's raising a son?
Your 14 year old comes in a little bit late. You're forming questions in your mind, but your not particularly alarmed. He hardly pays you any
attention and hands you your car keys as he passes by on his way to his bedroom.
You are having coffee at a freind's house. His wife walks in dangling a bra you know can't possibly fit her. She asks her husband were it came from.
You repeat some gossip. You find out that the gossip is about the person you are repeating it to.
The person you repeat it to is: your boss, your mom, your dad, a long time good freind, a very ill tempered person who is not beyond punching you out,
a girl who just accepted a first date from you - (oh lets build that one up: you're laughing at the stupidity of the person who was gossiped about),
or the person you are gossiping about is the person next waiting for a haircut.
Amos graduated from Lansing high school in early June 1969, along with John Macias. He was not aware until graduation day that
a cute brunette with expressive dark brown eyes, one that he and John had taken notice of these past couple of years, was a same year
classmate. The girl and he had little in common other than a smile in passing, save for a brief stint on the debate team. Amos, having
grown up in a much smaller community, found it odd he wouldn’t have even known her name; then again, the graduating class in Lansing
was larger than the entire community he came from in the U.P. and he hadn’t known everyone’s name back there either.
Jokes were exchanged the few times they were in the same brief gatherings before school and between classes, but never names;
not that he could recall anyway. He noticed her nearly every morning as he lighted from the city bus. It was nothing unusual for girls
to stand in one group watching for guys to arrive, or for guys to huddle and watch the girls arrive.
She stood one position before him in the line up waiting for commencement ceremonies to begin. They struck up a pleasant
conversation. It was quite a revelation to find out that she not only knew his name, but that she had her eye on him for the past
three years, fancying his manner, walk, his long hair, dark complexion and how well he wore his jeans with heavy rivets added to
re-enforce points of stress. Mostly, she admitted, she liked his quick, cute smile.
His tongue caught behind his lower teeth dumbfounded on how to say he felt the same about what he saw in her.
She seemed so at ease while he shook inside, not just because of what she said and the strange timing of such revelations at the
graduation ceremony and being on stage. He quit the debate team a week after signing up in his junior year because of his nervousness
to stand before an audience.
She remembered his brief stint in the debate club. He split the back of his jeans bending over to pick up his outline. Apparently,
not all points of stress could be shored up by rivets.
“I quit because you quit,” she smiled to his embarrassment. “In fact, I signed up because you did.”
It turned out she was the one that cajoled another guy to give up his sweater so Amos could tie the arms around his waist and let
the body of the sweater shield his gaping embarrassment. The other guy may have thought he was loaning it to her because she was
cold. She described the look on the other guy’s face when he realized her sole interest was in Amos, not the gallant owner of the
gray and white striped sweater.
He never knew, due to his humiliated state of mind, who to return the sweater to the next day. His younger brother owned it now.
She wished he would have gotten the sweater back to the rightful owner if he hadn’t been so shy and avoided her.
“I wasn’t avoiding you.”
“No?” she teased. “Why did you always look away when ever I looked at you in the halls if you weren’t avoiding me?”
Amos wasn’t all that aware of his behavior, but realized now how right she was. “I was, . . . ah . . . I don’t know.” He felt foolish,
almost upset she that she pressed for a response, totally confounded as to what should be said or done at this point.
“You’re shy,” her head tipped and she rolled her eyes upwards to play with his eyes.
“Guess so,” Amos admitted.
“I told my dad about you.”
“Eh? What he say?”
“Not much. I’m his little girl. You know how dads are about their little girls; they’re not to anxious to have guys come calling
for their daughters.”
“What’d you say about me?”
“’Didn’t have much to tell him seeing as you avoided me ever since you split your jeans.”
“Come on,” Amos’s voice rising a bit, “you didn’t tell him about that?”
Her emphatic nod confirmed that she most certainly did tell him of that. “Daddy thought you had it coming. He don’t understand why us
kids wear such tight jeans. He said that those who get too big for their britches will be exposed in the end.”
Amos stopped short of asking her if it should be worded “we kids” instead of “us kids.” For that matter, she probably should have used
the word “doesn’t” in place of “don’t,” but right then and there would have been terrible timing. It wasn’t that he could give a hoot
about such minute points of grammar, but that he didn’t know what to do next.
She unabashedly studied the jeans he wore under his open graduation gown complimenting him for their splendid fit.
Those, along with two other pairs, were purchased two waist sizes down back in late August 1967 for the start of his junior year, with
an inseam an inch or two longer than needed hoping he could hang on to them as long as possible as he grew and they shrank. The leg
hems now rested where they should just teasing the bow of his shoe laces, though the back of the cuffs were a bit frayed from having
been walked on back when they were too long. They were soft, though still quite durable; faded and trendily worn to the point they
looked as if they were paper thin by the way they drew attention to his sinewy muscles.
She knew, from what must obviously be her own experience, that he had to work at getting those jeans on, maybe laying on his back after
squirming them up as far as he could get them, some more tugging and pulling and then suck in his gut to pull the zipper close and
fasten the copper fly button. His belt, indenting his narrow waist and firm six-pack abs, appeared to be pulled in an extra notch to
stop the heavy duty fly button from popping out of its button hole.
She liked guys in tight jeans, but never imagined one could wear them like he did, and that other cutie that moved in from East Tawas,
John Macias. She wished either one of those two would have asked her out, but it never happened. Her hints with John were pretty obvious,
she thought; but he either didn’t catch one, or his interests went to someone else.
Amos assured her that John would probably have asked if he thought he had a chance she’d say yes. She learned as of late, he was headed
for seminary to be a priest, so that canceled him out.
“What about you?” She could be rather direct.
“Oh I’m doing fine.” Amos could have kicked himself a few seconds later when he realized what her question really meant. “I mean, well
. . . oh never mind.”
She let out a laugh. It was almost as if to say she enjoyed the polite nervousness of a shy guy. It also might have been a means to get
him to lighten up and get with it. There wasn’t that much time left for him to ask her out or at least ask for a phone number.
Amos knew that John and she shared a table in two art classes. He had a picture he drew of her in a bikini one semester, and a drawing
she did of him in a pair of scant Speedo racing trunks the next semester as proof. If only he could remember if John mentioned her name.
He must have, but he couldn’t recall what it was if he did say.
He smiled at John’s humor over the art class drawings, “Both of us have hairless chests.”
Busy, bustling office staffers called her attention away from him, but only for a moment. All the graduates were to pay attention. Some
sort of directions were given that went in one ear and instantly out the other. Amos’s mind was on conjuring up the nerve to find out if
she had a boyfriend and if not, what his chances were of seeing her, and frustrated that he never picked up on any clues, if there were
any, that he might have had a chance to date her these past two or three years. The chance would slip away in a mater of minutes and be
gone forever if he didn’t act fast. Get an address, a phone number, something!
She turned away for a moment to fix her top blouse button that slipped out of its hole. Her movements were dainty, he thought, delightful!
“Sorry about that,” she offered for having turned away from him.
“I’m not,” he almost spilled out. His face simply flushed. It was time to zip their graduation robes closed.
It was also the first time he ever asked a girl for a phone number. It wasn’t until after they parted for the day that he realized the
blunder he made, though she never let on, if in fact she caught it. He forgot to ask what her name was.
He toyed with the awkwardness of dialing her house, her dad answering, and he (Amos) asking, “Hi, you probably don’t know me, but I’d like
to speak to your daughter who just graduated; you know, and like maybe take her out sometime?”
At best, he’d get a dial tone after the old man hung up.
She was headed on a vacation with her family the day after graduation and his family had vacation plans were to begin about four
days after graduation. She told him she looked forward to hearing from him when they got back at the end of the month.
Well, he could ask John Macias for her name. That would be easy enough so long as he didn’t have to explain why. John would probably
comply, but not after having a good laugh and giving him a hard time due to his blunder. He also toyed with the idea of letting John know
the girl revealed in those final minutes of the senior year that she had fancied him as well.
“Not to worry,” Amos added the next day after he literally wrestled her name from John, “I let her know that you were hot about
her also, but decided to join a monastery instead.”
“Seminary,” John jovially corrected while pinned to the ground; “Why’d you tell her a monastery?”
“It sounded more sensational,” Amos said as he got up and extended a helping hand to his friend, “and secures my chances with her.”
Amos’s family went to Northern Michigan to stay with relatives near Ingalls. That’s roughly eighteen miles north and a bit west
of Birch Clump, located along US-41 between Stephenson and Wallace.
Amos faced his second afternoon up North with no one to call. The summers of free afternoons running about with friends were over.
They were young men now; maybe some of those who worked weekends would have time for him later if they had a weekday off. Enlistment
into Service or enrolment in college busied many graduates facing military conscription and Viet Nam.
The adults, happy to see him as he was to see them, didn’t quite cut it for an energetic eighteen year old, so he headed out
to his Granddad’s private shop in the barn to grab an old bamboo fly fishing rod the two of them put together ten years ago. Amos never
caught on to fly fishing. His preference was a simple hook and worm on a line, and sometimes fancying that up with a bobber. He wasn’t
really all that interested to catch any fish, though that would be nice and he brought along a tobacco offering.
Granddad walked on when Amos was fifteen; than is, in their ’Shinabe way of talking, died.
The girl Gret Johnson, curious about his attractive dark features and the shape of his eyes, asked what a Shinabe was when she
asked about family heritage.
“Sort of a folksy way to say Anishinabe,” but they were ushered onto the foot ball field for graduation before that word could
be explained.
Hardly anyone outside the relations used either word, Shinabe or Anishinabe. Many had adopted the French mispronunciation of Chippewa.
Granddad and a few others kindly insisted that Amos use their own words: Anishinabe, the Spontaneous People, or First People.
Amos was mixed, and so sometimes he was called Métis. Granddad said that was a right word, but seeing as Amos had Tribal enrolment,
he should tell people he was Anishinabe or Ojibwe.
“You don’t have to give them a class on this,” the Elder cautioned, “Most White folks won’t remember or don’t care. They just call
us Indians. You say you're Ojibwe. If they insist on more, then say Indian. They usually don’t want to hear much more, except to ask if you
live in a tea pea. And, if they cut you off to tell you they have a little bit of Indian in them, maybe through an Indian Princess, then
they definitely don’t give a diddly darn about you or your family.”
Granddad would pantomime sipping from a tea cup with one hand, and flicking a tiny pea from his thumb with the index finger of his
other hand when he pronounced tee-pee. Everyone understood the sarcasm; that is all the Shinabe did.
Amos followed the narrow river between the Grandparent’s property and a Great Uncle’s land, grabbed a kayak and headed upriver at
what he figured was another three or four miles to one of the secluded, shaded fishing holes Granddad had shown him. They used metal canoes
then, but the Great Uncle picked up a couple of kayak kits when Amos expressed an interest to build one.
“Don’t grow your hair long like those Hippies,” he recalled the Old Guy’s humorous manner of teaching the old ways, “Wear it like an
Indian.”
“Ojibwe,” Amos would respectfully correct him.
“Excuse yourself before speaking before an Elder, and don’t sass them or mock them,” the Grandfather scolded in jest.
Amos lived simultaneously in two worlds where some adults saw his hair as rebellious, his friends thought he was cool, jocks
called him a sissy, and his family saw it as tradition. At that, the Chippewa and the Indians thought he should give it up and get with
the modern world, while the Anishinabeg commend him for honoring the Traditional Ways.
His name, spelled like the Biblical name, was actually a means to give him an Anishinabe name on birth and baptismal certificates.
The Anishinabe name, Amoose, means Little Bee. His grandparents were instrumental in naming him.
Naming ceremonies, they explained to him, usually did not take place at birth, but seeing as how the government required all newborns
to have a name right away for the birth certificate they came up with that name right away. His mother was watching a bee near her belly
the day she and Amos’ father talked with the grandparents about names a few weeks before he was born.
Well, Amos contemplated, make it five worlds he lived in. He accepted all interpretations and definitions others gave him in balance except
for the athletes that called him sissy because of his long hair. He didn’t fare well when he invited one of the jocks outside, but they
dropped the name “sissy” after that.
He was always given a gift of traditional food when he left his Grandparent’s house. His mom made certain all her guests left with
some food as well, or his dad did. Sometimes, when Amos was small, he was told to carry the food out to the car for the older guests that
were leaving. It was a way to teach him this custom. The poor always gave food to departing guests as well. Amos’s family was well off by
comparison in so far as having a low paying steady job was better than not knowing from season to season if you had a job like so many
around here faced.
The family brought cases of maple sugar and syrup back to Lansing if they were up north in spring, or baskets of manoomin, wild
rice, if they returned in August. Everyone, especially the Potawatomi, had relations in the cities, in part due to the American Indian
Termination and Relocation orders, and these things were generously distributed.
The spot Amos chose to beach his kayak that day was surrounded by Lady Slipper orchids, also knows as Moccasin flowers or Jewel
Weed. These plants were called niimi`idii-makizin in the Ojibwe language, and were known as a cure for poison ivy. The two plants naturally
grew near each other, but when Europeans cleared the land, the delicate niimi`idii-makizin suffered, while poison ivy (omakakiibag)
proliferated as a result of the careless manner the new comers tried to rid themselves of it by chopping and hacking away at the tough
old vines and roots. Any stray segment of poison ivy could re-root.
Morning, noon or near evening time, there was always decent shade to be found on the hot days, brush to scoot behind if he didn’t
want passing boaters to see him, and a cold, clear spring of the finest fresh water to drink. Various berries and other wilderness treats
abounded close at hand.
The sound of creek water trickling near by enhanced the meditation and daydreams on a quiet day by one’s self. It was also the place
Amos first received a dream or vision as they sometimes call it. His Elders prepared him to go on a vision quest in 1965 at age 14. He had
slipped into a trance at this spot a couple weeks ahead of the time planned out by the Elders. He told them nothing of the first
experience; at least not that summer. But when the same inner feelings, voices and dreams came during the time and in the place the
elders had prepared for his dreaming, then he knew both experiences were the genuine thing.
Now, at eighteen yeas of age, he no more knew all what the vision meant than he did at age 14, but that is the nature of the
vision quest. It is not to find hard core answers to the meaning of life or to learn one’s destiny with any exacting clarity.
The fishing line was already in the water, though he hardly recalled preparing the rod and bait; he must have done so, but the
trance had already come over him. He could feel that his Guardian Spirits had waited for his return to this spot each of the last three
years since the dreaming, and they were here again this year.
Their being there was good. There seemed to be exceptionally loud spiriting that summer of ’69. Not noise as we think of it that
resounds from the vibrations of creation, but something that occupies the whole inner self and that which makes up the spirit being of
who we are, that is active and pushes away the natural noises and yet not totally separate from the physical either.
The vision or locution evaporated with hardly any notice, like a morning mist over a small still pond might vanish without much
notice. Still a memory of the mysterious sounds remained, not terribly unlike the tingling noise or sensation that followed after a
chain saw was shut off.
Amos realized by chance, while removing his watch on the clear but sticky day that the dream had lasted not less than an hour.
He let the fishing rod lazily sway right, then left and back again. Its weighted balance lulled his mental meanderings as the red and
white plastic bobber out in the water was pulled around with a baited hook suspended into the depth in hopes to tease and tantalize a
fish. The rippled reflection of a cloud passing by held his gaze. The fluffy cloud’s reflection elongated and for a moment shaped itself
like Gret, the girl who stood in front of him in the graduation line a week ago.
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